Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Introduction


The Circuit: Is about a boy and his family live in Mexico, Guadalajara come illegally to the United States of America. His dad talks about a California how wonderful it is and how cool it will be to go there.                            

When they arrive to California it’s much different than the dad says He said there will be plenty of work but when they arrive there was they had to wait for work.  Days past by it was all the same no work.

What the kids did for fun they would sit in the rail roads and look at the trains all day.

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  5. Your blog was good I liked it.It makes me want to read it, And you give good information about torito.

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  6. I like the book , Ive read it before.
    You dont really describe all of it as it is.
    Is there a movie about this book?

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  7. You explained the book in a good way. You gave good information. You also have some grammar mistakes and apostrophes where you don't need them

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  8. your blog needed more information but its good anyways. I have read this book and its a faithful family. Good description of torito.

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  9. I have read this book before its really great. I do think you should have a bit more information. Great Work!

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  10. What can I say? You did a good job. However you may have needed to put more information about the book, like Megan said. It sounds like an interesting book, though.

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  11. You had a little of grammar errors. You can also try to put more details so we can know more of this book. It still sounds like an interesting book though.

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  12. I agree with Josie and Megan. You should put a little more information. I have read the book before and its a great book!

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